Star #3
The third round of editing on Star. You’re able and welcome to examine what I changed and think about why, which is a great tool if you want to write something yourself. If you see something you’d like changed, please say so, but don’t ask me to change my style.
(Yes, I know Amanda is overwhelmingly sarcastic at points, but she’s a particularly sarcastic teenage girl, and she’s of a different species. As it is, I’m working on Amanda as much as anything else here.)
Chapter One: And You Thought Ditching School Was Fun
Chapter Two–How I Get Free Stuff
Chapter Three–Our Camping Trip is a TOTAL Train Wreck
Chapter Four–The Good, The Bad and The Weirdoes
Chapter Five–Oops, I Broke My Curfew
Chapter Six–A Bit Different from Debate Class
Chapter Seven–Maybe I’m Just Not Cut Out to be a Supermodel
Chapter Eight–I’m Gonna Kill You For That… No, I Actually Mean It
Chapter Nine–I Charge One Village an Hour for Babysitting
Chapter Ten–Where’s the Nearest Asylum?
Chapter Eleven–Let’s Load Up the Van… I Mean, the Flying Kid
