Poem: Potion
Potion
It winds, it works into the flesh
It seeps into your skin
For potency, we keep it fresh
The potion’s sinking in
You’ve no control of what it does
No choice but to allow
The liquid scare will make you buzz
And furrow up your brow
So sit and wait, no turning back
There’s nothing else to do!
It might just fill in what you lack
Or it might poison you
Within your cells occurs a change
And what, then, will we find?
Experiments that may derange
But could strengthen a mind!
Don’t just sit in the corner, then!
The taste is nice and brisk!
Go take a vial, you know you can!
Or won’t you take the risk?
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9:57 pm on June 8th, 2012
Hey, you said you hate That (anti-feminist) Sparkly Vampire Book (I do too!). Anyway, here’s a great site I found that picks apart the series,tells you what’s screwed up with the sentences, story, messages . . . You get the idea. http://reasoningwithvampires.tumblr.com
Happy readin’! Adios, paka. . . hope you don’t go nuts wondering HOW something that horrible sold millions of copies when you learn just how many things are wrong with it!
4:01 pm on June 11th, 2012
Er, yeah… although I didn’t bother to read it anyway. I don’t need to. I’ve been told by most people that it’s just a squealy vampire book filled with socially acceptable porn, and the only people I see liking it are squealy hormonal teenage chicks (and occasionally some older ladies who really don’t need to be reading that trash). I wouldn’t have a problem with it except that it’s kinda sad that people don’t know a good work from a bad one, and now I get a bad rep because people hear “teenage writer” and think I write vampire fan fiction. That site’s hilarious, though.